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Her. Or She.

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Sometimes,
I close my eyes
And imagine standing on a grassy hill
That overlooks
A city of mountains
Frosted with snow;
Their peaks illuminated
By the bright blue sky
As birds soar.
The feeling of freedom is overwhelming.

Sometimes,
I walk through town
And visit the places where we once were.
I pretend that she's with me
And wish for endless tomorrows
That I could spend
With
Her.

Sometimes,
I look out my window
And see the sunset.
A stunning eruption of
Red
      Orange
                  Yellow
I feel infinite.

Always,
When I think of these things
I remember her.
I see her.
I hear her.
I feel her.
I taste her.
No amount of freedom or feeling of
Forever
Can measure up to
Her beauty
And
How she makes me feel.

Endless tomorrows will never be enough.

-k.
Yep. I don't really feel like explaining this one. :/

Enjoy

Ps. "I feel infinite." Was kind of taken from The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky :heart:

Questions for feedback
What emotions are most prominent in this poem?
Which stanza is the most powerful, and why?
Does this poem make you think that there has been a breakup in the relationship, or the narrator is merely wishing to spend more time with her partner?
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taoMega20's avatar
i feel the same about a girl in my class, but she dosent notice me. nice poem, its sweet and almost brings a tear to my eye. almost